Long-mesmerized by hobbies like my work with the FIRST Robotics team, I believe State University would be the best choice to continue to nurture my love for electrical and computer engineering.
I have only scratched the surface in this ever evolving field but know that the technological potential is limitless.
I even loved the electric feeling of anxiety as I waited for the results.
Most of all, though, I loved the pursuit of science itself.
I feel that my background as an American Sikh will provide an innovative perspective in the university’s search for knowledge while helping it to develop a basis for future success.
And that, truly, is the greatest success I can imagine.Science in all its forms fascinated me, but science projects in particular were a category all to themselves.To me, science projects were a special joy that only grew with time.This emphasis on diversity can also be found in the variety of specialized departments found at State University.On top of its growing cultural and ethnic diversity, State University is becoming a master at creating a niche for every student.They, like me, are there because State University respects the value of diversity.I know from personal experience that in order to achieve the trust, honesty, and success that State University values, new people are needed to create a respectful environment for these values.Thus vindicated, my desire to further formalize my love of science brings me to State University.Thanks to this experience, I know now better than ever that State University is my future, because through it I seek another, permanent, opportunity to follow my passion for science and engineering.What makes it particularly effective is not just its cohesive structure and elegant style but also the level of details the author uses in the response.By directly identifying the specific aspects of the university that are attractive to the writer, the writer is able to clearly and effectively show not only his commitment to his studies but – perhaps more importantly – the level of thought he put into his decision to apply.